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| Subject: Kamishini no Yari Thu Nov 25, 2010 6:50 pm | |
| ======================================== Weapon Creation Name:Kamishini no Yari (God-Killing Spear) Ability/Description:Kami shini no Yari is one of the seven special swords of the mist village's seven swordsman of the mist. This sword possesses two special abilities. The first ability is that with the user's chakra implanted into it the sword the sword can stretch itself to an amazing length. The farthest recorded length is equivalent to 3 kilometers. The second most amazing part of this ability is the speed that the sword can reach that length, and that's at 1/2 the speed of sound(but Izuna will lie and make it sound slower to catch his target off guard). Also when someone is struck by the blade a certain poison is released. This is a special poison that has no existing cure, well not one that is known to anyone other than the swords weilder. The swords poison has two effects that takes a total of six posts to fully circulate. The first effect of the poison is that it cuases the enemies senses to perceive everything in reverse. The second stage(which activates on the fourth post that the person has been infected) is that it causes the enemy to see become paralyzed to where they can barely move their body. Appearance:Cost: (Will be determined by Mod) ========================================= |
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Fri Nov 26, 2010 1:36 am | |
| 13 kilometers is out of the question. 1 is as far as I'm willing to go. The speed of the extention is denied, the best you can hope for is the same speed as Kusanagi. Poison with "no cure" is also denied. I assume the 2 hallucination effect come into effect after the poison fully circulates. |
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:52 pm | |
| would u like to give further explination as to why you completely deny those? And what is wrong with having a poison that has a secret cure known only to those who wield the sword? |
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Hakudoshi
Posts : 583 Join date : 2010-10-21
| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Fri Nov 26, 2010 5:15 pm | |
| Maybe lower the distance Kyo, also maybe you can retracted it, at the speed of sound not 3 times faster? Also for the poison maybe split it up. 6posts in total, 3 posts for the halucinations then another 3 posts for the paralysis.
I don't see any problem with the poison only being known to the wielder. Probably IC he will tell certain people about the poison...if tahts the plan then its fine | |
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Fri Nov 26, 2010 6:23 pm | |
| ok haku and thats actually how i was planing to split up the poison lol
-edits made |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Fri Nov 26, 2010 6:30 pm | |
| The distance is denied because this isn't bleach and all of the ninja battles here are not conducted from 10 miles away. 1 kilometer is more than enough. "Uncureable" poison is denied because any medic nin worth his salt can create an antidote (If they could do it with Satoshi they can do it with him). |
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Fri Nov 26, 2010 6:59 pm | |
| Just saying that this isn't bleach is not a good enough reason because if it were then tia's character wouldn't have been approved nor would her sword. And so what if ninja battles aren't that wide who says that ill constantly make it reach that length? And as I recall the kusanagi itself could stretch quite a distance, maybe not as long as this sword but what would be the creativity if it was the same as that sword but with poison? And stop saying that the poison is incurable because ive said countless times that it has a cure but its not one that's broadcasted all over the ninja world. And who is satoshi? And did u forget sasori's poison? The only reason that they made an antidote was because sakura trained under tsunade who was pretty much thr worlds best medic nin. |
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:00 pm | |
| Speed of sound is to much and the sonic boom itself will knock the user out out. Make the speed A rank. Jounin may dodge it if they are skilled enough although with difficulty. |
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:01 pm | |
| huh? sonic boom? lol theres no sonic boom but ok fixed. |
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:04 pm | |
| Once you reach speed of sound you create whats called sonic boom. |
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:07 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:11 pm | |
| So if that sword goes that fast, then the sonic boom will affect the sword holder. Just make it slower. |
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:13 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:39 pm | |
| Even if it goes 3 miles accuracy is determined by how far you can see just dont forget that. Approved 1/2 |
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Hakudoshi
Posts : 583 Join date : 2010-10-21
| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Sun Nov 28, 2010 1:00 am | |
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Hakudoshi
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| Subject: Re: Kamishini no Yari Sun Nov 28, 2010 1:00 am | |
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