Aiyoku Bouji

Erased until i return - yumi

you got my ok 1/2
~its haku btw

Someone look at this dang it

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Name: Komudenshi - Electronic Infiltration
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton [Lightning]
Range: Area related
Description:Through the use of this technique, the user is able to travel through electronic devices such as electrical lines. As long as there is some sort of output area to come out of. Travel is incredibly fast, but it isnt instant. The longer the distance, the longer it takes to travel it. The technique is like shunshin except that it covers larger areas of travel and is more limited by when and where it can be used.

i doubt this would be a C ranked jutsu. Make it A or at least B ranked.

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Name: Obstruction
Rank: C
Type: fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Personal
Description: this seal placed on any surface summons a dense mist to cover a one mile area. This mist is covered in chakra obstructing even the sharingan as it see chakra flow, but not the byakugan.

Sharingan and Byakugan work the same way so why does it affect one but not the other? Again if it can foul a doujutsu make it at least B ranked.

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Name: Gateway seal
Rank: A
Type: fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Personal
Description: This seal is applied to two seeds. One seed is planted at a location one wishes to return. The other is planted at the users home, when one seed seal is activated the other automatically becomes active. The seed then grows into a giant Venus fly trap and engulfs the individual transporting him to the location of the other seed where he is spat out of the other Giant Venus fly traps mouth. After which both plants return to seeds to avoid being found. This can be used on multiple seeds, however the seeds are only linked in pairs. if you wish to travel to an area, you must use the paired seed. The seed take a whole post to open, only allowing transfer to the interlocking plant the following post. Seeds must be panted at least 1 mile apart from each other.

Its to much like a space/time technique. Unless you can explain how do you get transported from one to another?

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Name: Metal storm
Rank: A
Type: offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: long
Description: A kunai attached with a chakra string also with the appropriate seal on it is thrown in to the clouds, the thrower then feeds their ration chakra up though the chakra string into the storm clouds, then the thrower activates the seal multiplying the kunai by hundreds or even thousands depending the amount of chakra used. They then fall to earth as scattered lightning bolts. This attack is next to impossible to dodge because the numerous amounts of lightning bolts.

OP

Gone

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Name: Summoning seal
Rank: A
Type: fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Personal
Description: This seal is placed on the recipients back along the spinal cord. The seal allows the individual who placed it to transport the recipients to their current location no matter the distane. They cannot be sent back. The more individuals called the greater the chakra cost. Limit is 10 individuals with the seal. The summoner has differing seals along the forarms which must be smeared with blood and then they must clap their hands together initiating the call. The individual or individuals kanji name will appear on the summoner’s fingers as a burning glyph. After all the desired names of the individuals to be summoned have appeared over the fingers ( one per finger, why the limit is 10) the summoner claps their hands together. The Individuals seals along their back begin to burn marking the call of the summoner. The individuals then claps their hands together completing summoning.

Space/time= special jutsu

Approved by ryo.

added to Gateway seal

Name: Metal storm
Rank: A
Type: offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: long
Description: A kunai attached with a chakra string also with the appropriate seal on it is thrown in to the clouds, the thrower then feeds their ration chakra up though the chakra string into the storm clouds, then the thrower activates the seal multiplying the kunai by hundreds or even thousands depending the amount of chakra used. They then fall to earth as scattered lightning bolts. This attack is next to impossible to dodge because the numerous amounts of lightning bolts.


Maybe not impossible to dodge......give some lean way

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Name: Metal storm
Rank: A
Type: offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: long
Description: A kunai attached with a chakra string also with the appropriate seal on it is thrown in to the clouds, the thrower then feeds their ration chakra up though the chakra string into the storm clouds, then the thrower activates the seal multiplying the kunai by hundreds or even thousands depending the amount of chakra used. They then fall to earth as scattered lightning bolts. This attack is next to impossible to dodge because the numerous amounts of lightning bolts.


Maybe not impossible to dodge......give some lean way

Make it an AA and ill let it go.

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Name: Obstruction
Rank: B
Type: fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Personal
Description: this seal placed on any surface summons a dense mist to cover a one mile area. This mist is covered in chakra obstructing even the sharingan as it see chakra flow

If Doujutsu arent able to see through it then its AA rank.

done

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