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PostSubject: Hikaru, Amiya- Konoha Chuunin (Finito- Finished)   Hikaru, Amiya- Konoha Chuunin (Finito- Finished) Icon_minitimeTue Oct 19, 2010 7:03 pm

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Hikaru, Amiya- Konoha Chuunin (Finito- Finished) Amipose

Name: Hikaru, Amiya (Literally translates to Beautiful Radiance)
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Rank: Chuunin
Village: Konohagakure
Appearance: Amiya has vivid purple hair that is striking to say the least and hazel coloured eyes. Her hair used to be the length of her shoulder blades when she first graduated as a Genin from the Academy, but due to becoming more experienced as a ninja she has realised that long hair only gets in the way while fighting, so she had it cut shorter recently. Now that it is cut, it reaches her jawbone and is usually quite messy because she rarely puts any effort into making sure her hair looks alright. She has been naturally blessed with a slim figure that is still showing signs of more development to come within the next couple of years.

First Graduated:
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Past Attire: Amiya is recently seen to be wearing a bright blue undershirt, and a looser black shirt over the top that shows the blue sleeves. As well as this she wears a bright blue skirt that matches her undershirt in colour, and this reaches her midthighs in length. On her right leg she has bandages tied all the way up her thigh and a weapon pouch attached there, and on her feet she wears startling red sandles that are cut away at the toe. In her hair she always has a hair clip that resembles a shurikan, and on her hands she has black fingerless gloves and black netting that covers her wrists. Over her back is a white strap that contains her black kanata, and around her waist is a standard white hip bag that contains a multitude of ninja weapons.
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Current Attire: After training at the Suna oupost during her mission, Amiya has aquired new clothing due to her old clothes being in tatters from all the incidents she has been involved in. She now wears a lilac kimono that is tied firmly in place with a large pink ribbon, and the kimono itself ends at around her midthighs. Underneath the kimono, she wears a long-sleeved black shirt that it only seen on her upper arms. On her hands she wears lilac fingerless gloves that end up above her elbow with a large cuff to keep them in place. She also wears sturdy black sandals with solid black shinpads that end below her knees. Over her back is a thicker white strap that still contains the same weapon even though she is planning on getting a new sword. Her hair has grown longer again now, so she keeps some of it tied back in a bun at the back of her head with a thin pink ribbon. The bangs still frame her face and she has the same sweeping fringe over her left eye.
{Look at main picture given}

Personality: Amiya is always upbeat and optimistic, what is seen as a cheerleader of sorts. She is loud, extremely hyper-active most of the time, confident, friendly, sarcastic and above all determined to achieve her dreams and aspirations in life. She is always encouraging everyone to do what they want to do, and not to let anyone stand in their way no matter what, so she always upholds this as her most important priority. Besides this, she has an unwavering loyallty to her friends, and will do everything to protect them and keep them safe from harm. She also has a great sense of duty, and is proud to be a shinobi of Konoha even though she is only a 'rookie' ranked ninja.

At times, there are circumstances when Amiya acts almost twice her age. In difficult fights, this is a prime example of when she will show a new found level head and strategic way of thinking. If she is training, or sparring with an opponent that she is familiar with, then she will be her usual self. Whenever she is out on a mission and ends up fighting with a real opponent that could kill her, she instantly reverts for her more serious approach on things, and will show her intellect with battle strategies and natural ability to pick up on weak points with ease to defeat her opponent.

After the recent experiences Amiya has been through, she has matured a lot in her mannerisms. She is still relatively the same as she used to be before the mission she embarked on, but has developed a strange air of respect around her like a friend of hers stated. Her strong will is even stronger than ever, and will refuse to give up no matter what. Protectiveness over her comrades is also a new thing that kicks in whenever faced with an opponent. She seems to have aged only in the two weeks she has been away from the village and endured many things many people will never experience in their life-time.

The Dreams: Amiya has always had very high hopes for herself, and ever since she was back in the Academy she has wanted to become a Sannin of Konoha. She is absolutely in awe of their amazingly high status and the fact that they go down in history, which is something she has always wanted to do; to make her life the best that she can and create some history while doing it.

Special Characteristics-

~Thinks Outside the Box~ In a very short timeframe Amiya has seen and lived through many things that other ninja don't get to experience in their entire lifetimes. Because of this almost nothing can surprise her anymore. She finds it easier to see through opponent's strategies, sneak and surprise attacks. Also Genjutsus don't quite have the same shocking bite they use to.

~Fast Learner~ Ever since she was a young child, Amiya has had the ability to learn new things about twice as fast as a regular person would. This allows her to pick up on new techniques quicker and make the best out of her training.

~Ambidextrous~ This is a very essential attribute for anyone who practices in Weaponry or Kenjutsu (which Amiya does) because if one arm becomes injured in battle, the ninja can still carry on using their weapon.

~Stamina and Speed~ Because Amiya practices in Weaponry (soon to be Kenjutsu), she has to be very nimble and take a lot of punishment dealt out by powerful attacks. She doesn't tire quickly either.
Clan: None
Element(s): Wind- Fuuton (Affinity), Water- Suiton (Secondary), Earth (To be learned when Sp. Jounin)

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Jutsu

Kenjutsu:
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Custom Jutsu:
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Basic Jutsu: (I know it says not to mention them, but I did anyway~ x3)
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Fuuton Jutsu:
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Suiton Jutsu:
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Total: [-28-]
E-Rank - [-6-]
D-Rank - [-6-]
C-Rank - [-13-]
B-Rank - [-3-]
A-Rank - [-0-]
AA-Rank - [-0-]
S-Rank - [-0-]


Items

  • Kunai
  • Shuriken
  • Exploding Tags
  • Senbon
  • Wire
  • Smoke bombs
  • Flash Bombs
  • Weaponry Scrolls (Like Tenten's in the anime/manga)
  • Two silver nunchucks that are strapped in a black strap around the top of Amiya's left thigh under her kimono
  • Kanata (Has special metal that allows it to absorb chakra into the blade for special attacks)

    Name: Hosoiken (Literally means; Slender Blade)
    Ability/Description:
    This kanata is slim and sheathed in a simple black case complete with a black handle. Upon first inspection it appears to be nothing special; it weighs the same as a normal kanata and there are no out of the ordinary markings on it. The only special thing about it is that this blade can absorb chakra like most swords that are needed for Kenjutsu. It is also extremely light so that Amiya can swing it round easily. However, this kanata is only while she learns the very basics of Kenjutsu. When she becomes a Chuunin, her training will be stepped up for her to be able to use a sword much bigger, heavier and more powerful. Even though Amiya has effectively ranked up to being a Chuunin, she does not have the facilities around her at this moment in time to gain a new sword.
    Appearance: Hikaru, Amiya- Konoha Chuunin (Finito- Finished) XL1050
    Cost: (Will be determined by Mod)




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History:

~Brought into the world
Amiya was born into the Hikaru family which was never well-respected as far as shinobi went. Her father was a simple Chuunin of the village that retired two years prior to her being born because he settled down with his wife who was a civilian. So, Amiya was never seen to achieve great things. Her small family lived in a cosy little apartment with two bedrooms; enough for her and her parents. They had all the bare essentials they could need, but that meant there wasn't much room for luxuries. Amiya always had the bare minimum of toys, and one in particular was extremely special to her that she had when she was born. It was only a knitted rabbit that her mother had made for her, so it shows the modest early life she had. She didn't expect much from her mother and father, but she was always given the utmost attention, love and care from her parents.

~Growing up
As a child, Amiya was always one of the loudest, most crazy and daring kid that there was around, but despite this she was always ignored because her parents weren't anyone special and they had next to no money. No matter how hard she tried to make friends, she always failed. This didn't really seem to bother her at first, but then when she announced to her peers that she wanted to become a legendary Sannin when she grew up, things got much worse for her. The other children started to jeer at her, throw stones and just make her life a living hell for someone only 6 years of age. Every evening she would go home to her parents as if nothing had happened because she didn't want to worry them with her own problems, as she often put it.

One day, the other kids started to mock her parents, and this was the final straw. Amiya lost her temper and really beat up the few that had been bullying her, and so she automatically earned respect from those that were scared of the bullies. From that day on, Amiya's strange talent of making friends with such diverse people started to show. It was the few little bullies that were holding her back and scaring others into not talking to her, but now that they were knocked down a few pegs, she could socialise and go home feeling good about herself.

~To become acknowledged!
Amiya joined the Academy at the age of 7, just like everyone else in her year group. She was shown to excel in the Ninjutsu studies because she could learn all the techniques quickly and have every hand sign down to a fine art within a few days or a week. This natural ability she had didn't go un-noticed, and her sensei always said to her parents how proud they should be of their daughter who was now surpassing many of the best students in the class. Her weaponry skills were good, and her accuracy was definitely something to be admired. Her written work was not bad, but not exactly good either because she didn't see the point in acedemic study. She focused so much on her stronger subjects like Ninjutsu, Weaponry and even Genjutsu at the time. She had always been good at making up strategies, so she excelled in these few classes too, and actually picked up on some good general knowledge about the shinobi world. She just didn't choose to get it all down on paper.

She graduated from the Academy when she was aged 11, nearly 12 and got her father to help her find a teacher for Kenjutsu. It had been encouraged by her sensei that Kenjutsu was the way to go because of her accuracy with weapons and the speed she seemed to have.

~The early Genin years
Her first year or so of being a Genin was what she viewed as easy; Kenjutsu training primarily, along with some practice of her Ninjutsu. It had been discovered that her main element was Fuuton (Wind) which was extremely strong with use of weapons involved. In truth it did take quite a while to get a grasp of her chakra element training, but after this was done Amiya could put all her focus on Kenjutsu since that was something she really enjoyed and did well at. During this form of training, she found that she was ambidextrous; another good trait for a Kenjutsu user.

~Stepping up to the challenge; later Genin years
After recently turning 14, Amiya is now considered a more experienced Genin since many would have graduated to Chuunin now at her age. Because she had been busy with perfecting control over her weapon and elemental attacks to go with her Kenjutsu, she hadn't really paid much attention to this simple fact. If she was to become a Sannin, she would need to rank up all the way to a Special Jounin, or even higher before she could be noticed by the Hokage. At this moment in time, Amiya is preparing herself for some serious training in order to stand her in good stead for ranking up to the Chuunin rank; the next step on her long journey to becoming a Sannin.

~Chuunin? Really?
Amiya was sent out on a solo mission 2 weeks ago by the Hokage, and ended up in all sorts of trouble. Not only did her mission become scary, there were times that Amiya greatly feared for her life. She was brought back to the Suna outpost she had stayed at before after escaping from Greenhorn Peak with her comrade Kisai to receive training from the two most powerful shinobi at said outpost. She discovered her secondry element was Water, and studied as much as she could about several new jutsu she would be able to perform. She practised relentlessly and until she had little to no chakra left, but finally she had mastered all that she needed to. The only thing she was disappointed with was the fact that she could not get a new sword to aid her in combat. Her old sensei back in Konoha had promised her that by the time she reached Chuunin rank she would be able to have a bigger, better and much more powerful sword at her disposal. Alas, Amiya is too far away from home and near no facility that would be able to aid her in this fact. Instead she has simply mastered every aspect of wielding her kanata.

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Finally done- 878 words for History
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Can I get this looked at please? :3
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Everything looks fine, nice history.
Just one thing, you have 7 D-ranks and 4 C-ranks...you need to remove one D-C rank jutsu.
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Ah, sorry about that. I've removed one and lowered the count of my overall jutsu.
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Very good, Approved 1/2
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2/2 Approved

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UPDATE: New characteristics gained from plot rping. ~Thinks utside the Box~
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Finished Chuunin update
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Finished for reals now
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Can I get someone to check over this? :3
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The chuunin history part could have used some more work, but aside form that everything is ok.
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