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Shinobi Kaiku is a new alternate universe Naruto based rpg. It is set in the same time as the series but with an alternate storyline, you however may choose where that story leads.
 
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PostSubject: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeSat Jan 08, 2011 10:17 am

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Character Certification

Name: Mitsukai Kuragari
Nickname: Angel of Amegakure
Age: 25, acts as if she has been living for all eternity.
Gender: Female
Rank: Kage/Leader of Ame
Village: Amegakure
Appearance:
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Personality:
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Clan: N/A
Element(s): Water, Fire, Medical

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Jutsu
Medical Ninjutsu
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Fire Ninjutsu
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Water Ninjutsu
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Other:
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Total: [-20-]
D-Rank - [-1-]
C-Rank - [-4-]
B-Rank - [-3-]
A-Rank - [-10-]
AA-Rank - [-0-]
S-Rank - [-1-]

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  • Kunai
  • Shuriken
  • Exploding Tags
  • Name: Hope
    Ability/Description: It’s made of a near indestructible metal that can deflect most if not all projectiles coming her way. It is six foot in length and is used as a walking stick most of the time. It is her first line of defense.
    Appearance:
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  • Name: Pain
    Ability/Description:It is a curved blade that Mitsukai uses as her right hand blade. It has the ability to deflect boulders and rocks from earth ninjutsu away from her.
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  • Name: Destruction
    Ability/Description: It is a masamune sword. It is about 66 inches long and is used primarily in her left hand. Appearance:
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History:
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RP Sample: She stood upon the top of the buildings, looking over the rain drenched land. ”The god of this world shall rain down pain upon this land for going against his wishes. I will help bring the pain to its people.” Her wings were spread wide, somehow deflecting the rain as it hit the feathers. Her black hair spread down her back like a flowing river and reached to about her knees. Her black long sleeve shirt fit snug to her body. Her eyes seemed to suck people into a hypnotic state. She looked down to her ANBU Captain as she shook her wings. ”Your men need to hunt down a missing nin. The report is on your desk. You are to send them out as soon as you possibly can. This mission is top priority. This ninja has a lot of our secrets on her person. Kill them and burn the body to ashes. It serves them right for going against god’s wishes.” She smirked as she turned away. ”You are free to go.” She signaled for him to leave her as she waited for her sister to appear.

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Pet
Name: Tourufu
Appearance:
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Jutsu: N/A

Summon
Name: Arufurufu
Rank: S
Appearance:
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Jutsu:
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Name: Taka
Rank: D
Appearance:
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Jutsu: N/A

Details of Wings: They are big black wings that jet out of Mitsukai Kuragari's back. They are waterproof. Feathers can be ripped from them, but the wings themselves can not be ripped out from her back. They can protect her from being burned by fire and fire ninjutsu up to about B-A, however it forms a burnt layer on them that must be shaken off before they can fly. They can deflect projectiles if swung the right way, much like an arm can if it hits a kunai right. However most projectiles stick in the wing, that must be shaken out. They can keep the fire from an explosion from harming Mitsukai, however the shockwave can still affect her and knock her away.


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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeSat Jan 08, 2011 1:54 pm

Amekage spot is taken by Yoshi.
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeSat Jan 08, 2011 4:45 pm

His spot is revoked, hes been gone far to long to keep it.
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeSun Jan 09, 2011 6:15 pm

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Name: Teleportation Technique
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Description: A Unique jutsu that is known only by Mitsukai. This jutsu allows him to teleport between locations with varying results. The longer the distance, the more concentration and chakra is required. Thus if used in the heat of battle, he would only be able to teleport so far without stopping and concentrating better. This technique is mostly used to teleport between his office and the Hokage's office. Anyone or anything that he is touching is teleported with him. This does not include items like trees and flooring. It includes smaller items and/or creatures about his size or smaller.
Space/time jutsu, definitly not allowed upon creation, it will cost a lot of points later on. You can't have this jutsu.

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Name: Hope
Ability/Description: It’s made of an indestructible metal that can deflect most if not all projectiles coming her way. It has the ability to absorb fire and lightning and send those back at the opponent. It is six foot in length and is used as a walking stick most of the time. It is her first line of defense.
I understand being able to absord some fire attacks that are maybe a little weaker but not all, as for lightning, how can it absorb that chakra? I think it would be better kept as fire alone because its in your chakra nature.

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She has large black wings that have the wing span of about twenty-four feet that expand out of her back, that seem to be water repellent.
Can you explain this concept, how does she have wings, in the history they just appear but the origin is not really determined.



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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeMon Jan 10, 2011 2:45 am

updated
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeMon Jan 10, 2011 6:41 am

Name: Fire Style: Fire Submersion Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: A white flame surrounds the area Mitsukai and her opponent are in, with a 360 circle, then a red flame becomes

~Is this finished?


Name: Fire Style: Holy Flame Swords
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: White Flames surround her two swords, Pain and Destruction. These flames have the ability to create third degree burns just by coming within six inches from them.

~ Contact creates 3rd degree burns sounds better no?

Weapons:

~Your swords abilities, need to be converted into jutsu then added to your jutsu list and will count towards your total
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeMon Jan 10, 2011 4:03 pm

Thanks for notcing the first jutsu Haku. I must have been destracted while working on it
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeMon Jan 10, 2011 4:27 pm

Name: Fire Style: Fire Submersion Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: A white flame surrounds the area Mitsukai and her opponent are in, with a 360 circle, then a red flame threads in and begin submerging the area in flames. Mitsukai uses her power of flight to fly over the flames, but they are as high as 20 feet so she must be somewhat careful.

The power of this far exceeds C-rank.

Name: Fire Style: Holy Fire Swarm
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: White flames surround the entire area attacking the opponents like millions of bees stnging them over and over again. This technique lasts for about a minute before subsiding.

Give duration in posts not time.

Name: Fire Style: Holy Flame Swords
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: White Flames surround her two swords, Pain and Destruction. These flames have the ability to create third degree burns just by coming within six inches from them.

Not C-rank, you will not burn someone for 6 inches away with a C-rank, make it B or change that to contact

It’s made of an indestructible metal that can deflect most if not all projectiles coming her way. It has the ability to absorb fire and send those back at the opponent. It is six foot in length and is used as a walking stick most of the time. It is her first line of defense.

Indestructible metal and fire absorbing will cost you a lot 1500 or more points. if you want it cheaper drop the power down some. near indestructible is better and give the fire absorbing a rank limit.
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeMon Jan 10, 2011 4:55 pm

I think I got everything
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeMon Jan 10, 2011 8:32 pm

Weapons:

~Your swords abilities, need to be converted into jutsu then added to your jutsu list and will count towards your total

~ I dont see this done Sad

Wings:

Ok, how destructible are we talking? Can they block explosions? Projectiles ok, explosive kunai? can they block jutsu? up to what rank? Can they get burnt? Ripped off?
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeMon Jan 10, 2011 10:03 pm

Hakudoshi wrote:
Weapons:

~Your swords abilities, need to be converted into jutsu then added to your jutsu list and will count towards your total

~ I dont see this done Sad

Wings:

Ok, how destructible are we talking? Can they block explosions? Projectiles ok, explosive kunai? can they block jutsu? up to what rank? Can they get burnt? Ripped off?
Yumi said not too.

I will get some details written on the wings however
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeMon Jan 10, 2011 11:26 pm

Think I got it all
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeWed Jan 12, 2011 8:41 pm

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Name: Fire Style: Holy Flame Swords
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: White Flames surround her two swords, Pain and Destruction. These flames have the ability to create third degree burns just by coming in contact with them, second degree burns within 2 inches, and first degree burns within two inches.
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I think you made a mistake here lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeWed Jan 12, 2011 8:45 pm

Looks fine by me approved 1/2
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PostSubject: Re: Mitsukai Kuragari   Mitsukai Kuragari Icon_minitimeWed Jan 12, 2011 8:51 pm

2/2 approved

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