Nanako, Higashi FINISHED ^^

"Erased until i return" - Yumi

So far so good, but please rephrase the description of Ama Kakeru Ryu no Hirameki. And try to avoid words like "godlike speed" or worse "beyond godlike speed".

FINALLY COMPLETE

wait... where's your appearance?

~kira: her appearence is the picture....

~Yumi: Are you allowed to have Ice release? I mena its a combination of Wind + Water so would that mean you have those 2?

If its a KG she doesn't have to have those 2 (just like Gaara could only use Sand even though sand=earth+wind). But if she ever tries to get new elements she has to choose water and wind.

I think you'll need some points for the armor. Infuuin seal denied because seals and medical jutsus are 2 separate things and there is no such thing as a healing "chakra", if there were then what would be the point of medic ninja and jutsus?

All of your jutsus are ether Supplimentary or have no typr. Spirit Armor for example is clearly a Defense jutsu and Spirit Blade is clearly an Attack jutsu (and not supplimentary). Please add Attack/Defense/Supplimentary to all your jutsus respectively.

Shukuchi denied, too much room for abuse. You can, if you wish, make an alternative jutsu for body flicker so that you can use it ether without handseals or more frequently or one that's faster than body flicker. The point is we can't have you running around AND attacking freely at above shunshin speed.

That is all.

Wow, I expected at least 1 multiclass jutsu. That's some kejutsu you have there.

APPROVED 1/2

Approved 2/2

But remember that

Quote :

Name: Elemental Negation
Rank: S
Type: fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Personal
Description: By making a series of handseals and placing a hand to the ground, the user is able to summon a pillar that negates and/or absorbs all jutsu of a certain element within a 200-meters radius including the users. meaning that their jutsu will be absorbed as well. Can be destroyed by pricing A rank jutsu

cannot absorb jutsu's that are of a fusion element such as ice or lava etc.

Alosi i do not know where im supposed to move this as there is no Iron ninja approved board yet.